Saturday 3 March 2012

Tommy's Forest description

Tommy wrote this description of a forest for his English homework last week.


The wind blows through the swaying trees as they hiss their very own song. Animals hide in the undergrowth scared of the wind that to them is a monster. When the wind stops it is almost silent, the trees stay still and the animals come out to play. At night the forest is dark and creepy you can only hear the crows and owls. In sunny weather everyone is happy and the birds are out. The sun creeps through the leaves on the trees making streams of light beam down.

2 comments:

  1. I like the way you have varied your sentence openings and used lots of adjectives for description.

    -Mr Crow

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  2. this is really gd well done tommy 8D



    from brown haired girl (6b)

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